?OUTSIDE THE WAR GATE?
Macduff: carrier turn to Macbeth, turn. Macbeth: The wait is now over… I’m carrying too much blood on my hands that is mine. Macduff: My gun is my own voice… it is more bloodier than words can express. {Gun/sword fight} Macbeth:however u can’t kill me as the prophecy states that anything born by a woman can’t kill me ever. Macduff:well u are mistaken. I’m born via c-section… so ur fate would not be decided by thee witches but by the gods. Macbeth:this cannot be true… but how… it’s impossible… I won’t fight with you.. I can’t. Macduff:fine then, be the coward and live to see day but u will die of guilt eventually as we know who the real monster is. Macbeth:I will fight. I will let the gods decide. Not thee witches… I may lay by Duncan’s side but I know I will die like a hero therefore u r doing me a favor. Enough. Die macduff!!!!!
July 17, 2016 at 9:07 pm
Excellent start here Camilo, I like your scene choice and the way that you have adapted the language.
As you finish the rest of the scene:
1) Think about how you can manipulate the language from the scene in order to put across your take on it. Think about what language features you could use to create your own imagery.
2) Feel free to add more stage directions and descriptions about what the stage might look like.